This is a relatively short demo. Would enjoy some feedback on structure, direction, and story line. Thanks! (I know the depth is..well shallow as of yet but it's a rough draft of a work in progress and my first attempt, judge accordingly)
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Had a lot of fun playing, and like where the plot was heading. All though at times it was unclear what the game wanted me to do, for instance, I never realized that you could go inside from the yard, as nothing was mentioned about it.
I think this was very interesting, and the structure was good. You were very concise but descriptive at the same time, which is something you should keep up. Overall I loved it and would like to see more from you!