Assassin by Mocha Man and Eager Elmer

Comment OrlandoS51

How do you make a map? I am very confused.

Review maxx gamer

the map doesn't work and i am stuck finding the ballpit

Comment ziongame

Took me two hours to figure out

Comment Deadnightmare994

Where can you find the full map?

Review kokybo

i love this game. It took me a while to figure out but now i get what i am doing

Review TeriyakiFreak

I've talked to Vinnie, now I'm stuck in the club, what do I do?!

Comment TeriyakiFreak

Don't know how to join the mafia...

Comment Paper Asssassin

I am so sorry! I ment to rate the game a 5! I am so soooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy! Please forgive me!!!

Review Paper Asssassin

SUPER EPIC GAME!!! BEST. GAME. EVER. THIS SHOULD BE RATED TOP GAME!!!

Comment Paper Asssassin

I'm trying to make a game with currency like this one but I don't know how to set up a currency system. Please Help!

Comment jc12121

This is an excelent city rpg, which are quite uncommon in the first place, (well, at least well done ones,) and this one is truly a masterpiece. Excellent work!

Review calidro2

The best text-based game I have ever played! But unfortunately the >Restore command doesn't work and I can't load my game. I was very deep in the story already and didn't want to restart the game so I quit before I could finish the story. PLEASE FIX THIS

Comment mrlawl1200

How do i buy a car

Review Mac Ewing

Pretty good so far. The only suggestion I can make would be using the "clear screen" every now and then. Some of the street descriptions were big enough that it could get a bit confusing. Really good gameplay, though.

Review Zelman Flame 22

Fantastic game I love it!!

Comment gameroo1

cool, I got shot in the gut by Vinnie though. D:

Comment alora

it was a little buggy for me, i have no idea why, but i could never get a job. :P ill rate it when i finish it.. IF i finish it..

Review Lucas

i cannt find duck pond

Comment hulkman508

David Whyld certainly has a lot to say.

Review Lorenzo Galante

Pretty awesome game, but I finished it in less than 15 minutes. Can't you put more story??

Review Edzet

I liked it.
Thanks again Mocha Man and Eager Elmer.

Comment Rosanna Hostetler

I enjoyed this game. It's the first game I actually got through though I did not like the last part. Why get killed if you win a game? I have not figured out how to buy a car at the dealership as apparently they were bribed not to sell. so how and where do I buy a car?

Comment Kyle Taylor

Oops - sorry Eager Elmer. Overlooked the fact that you co-authored this game. As I say, I liked the concept but it can't get more than 2 stars without work on it. Maybe you could try to produce a fuller version.

Review Kyle Taylor

Mocha Man definitely does things unconventionally. That's not necessarily a bad thing and I did come to enjoy some aspects of this game. The limited command interface in this game was a pain, and it took a while to get used to it. I found it irritating that a verb like 'search' could be recognised in one or two locations, like the hospital, but unrecognised anywhere else. Still, the instructions at the beginning pointed me in the right direction as to how to get to grips with this game, which was fun in a way.

Normally, I detest filler locations, and I like text adventures which are short on rooms and long on interactivity. However, this game doesn't seem to be a text adventure in the conventional sense. The main challenge (apart from figuring out its logic) is to hunt the details in the ocean of the town map.

The game is much too limited. It is only half a game really. Money can be made various ways - doing missions for the mafia, gambling and pawning stolen goods. I liked that part. I was also supposed to be able to get money by racing cars, though I never got enough money to buy a car. Money doesn't seem to help you much though, as you don't need to make much money to complete the game by killing the mayor. It doesn't hold together. Mocha Man, you should have brought in another objective in the game - something you would need a huge amount of money for, and more ways of making money (if I'm ever to race cars).

It also needed more interactive elements in the game. There were some nice details which are very easily missed, like the town notice board, and the bored receptionist. There needed to be more though. Mocha Man also confuses his east with his west in room descriptions. The church in this game. The hallway in Spectrum. Sort it out.

Review David Whyld

With my thirst for appallingly crap games satisfied

Review GAMER!

I really liked this game. There are two things that are stopping me from giving the game a five out of five. The first one is that I don't liek the ending. The second thing is that I think the game's too short. If you make another maybe you could make the game longer.

Review Michael the gamer

The the best Game I ever Seen!
this game has a lot of description
And I liked the ending

Well Done Mocha Man and Eager Elmer!

Review Andrew Trewin

"In this game you will explore ThereIsNoMafiaHereVille, a large happy town with a powerful mafia." for one thing, there is only 5 members of the mafia, so it aint all that powerful...

There are loads of rooms with no purpose, and every object is in the game FOR a purpose... Maybe, If you make a numero 2, you should add some descriptive objects.
IE. In the Car Lot were you buy a car, if you try to kill the guy selling them, he "runs you over many times with a car" were is the car?

Its also pretty short, with only about 3 missions if my memory serves me correctly.

Other than all of the above, 5 OUTTA 5!! YOU ROCK! KICK ASS! MAKE ANOTHER ONE! WOOOO!

~ AT

Comment Jeremy

I've made a better map for this game! Hopefully it is accurate. I'll finish beating the game with it and if it is good I'll post it up somewhere. Meanwhile if anyone wants to test it let me know.

Comment Joyce

how do you get the map to show on the screen? all I get is a blank screen when I click on it.

Comment patrick

Hi, could someone tell me what to do after going with vinnie and awakening? Thanks!

Review The Toasty One

I had a lot of troubles with making a mpa, and that frustrated me a lot. Other than that, it was very interesting. I'm afraid I don't have the kind of patience it takes to play a game with such a large environment, but I am sure if I had taken more time, it would have been very enjoyable.

Review ConditionZeroMaster

Good Game! I found it rather easy to beat because there weren't really any puzzles. Puzzles slow me down a lot. Finshed it in under Half an Hour. Great Game!

Review Anonymous

It was great yet the map was awful. It was tough to get around if you know what I mean.

Review kewldude606/Daniel Finnie

Everything was awesome, except I couldn't get past the bank robbery. I got the bag of money and went back to the club, like it said when you typed "mission" after getting the money. The only people there were Delphi and someone else. I spoke to them, used the money, dropped the money, and did tons of other stuff, but nothing happened. Then I went back to Main & Ave., where you first meet the Mafia Leader. He was there and I had to do everything again...And the same thing happened.

Other than that, great game. I like the idea of the cars.

Comment Mocha Man and Eager Elmer

Thanks all for the positive comments. After my hard drive got mostly wiped by a virus, I lost all my quest files. Ah well. That was awhile ago. I have since moved on to programming graphical computer games (download them at http://drgames.2ya.com), but have re-downloaded QDK so maybe I'll start another quest game eventually... perhaps more of Assassin... I dunno. I'm glad people enjoy assassin so much though.

Review Caleb howell

Nice game, good long descriptions and a good arsenal of weapons, ill give you that, but some things were wrong, there was really no use for the shotgun, and it was a little to short, but otherwhise a great game and well worth the download.

Review WeUp03

This is perhaps the best game on this site!!! I agree finding the bomb is a little diffucult. I was also unable to find it and the map is almost pointless. Don't take it the wrong way I love the game just frustrating at times. Maybe the next installment will fix this :]

Maybe if you did'nt mind me and you could work on a S.W.A.T game or somethin. You are a very talented person keep up the good work!!!

Review Captain Jack Sparrow

The game is great; you'd figure it was made by a professional. I'm stuck on the fifth (I think) mission, where you have to assassinate the mayor. I accept the mission, bought the silencer and go into the mansion but the alarm sounds and get shot.

Comment Adam Ironside

Mocha Man: I think i may have a hidden viruson my computor somewhere. I'm doing intensive searching as my computor keeps crashing and freezing the screen. Maybe that was the problme eh?

Review Stormy

I liked the game. It was easy and fun to following. Not a lot of going around in circles. I wasn't too pleased at being killed at the end but hey you can't have everything...LOL

Comment Mocha Man and Eager Elmer

To Adji: I have absoluteley no idea in the slighest whatsoever why the screen went blank. Other bugs?? Aaah! On my computer, I tested and tested the game, and there were none, so perhaps it is a compatibility problem. I dont know.

To Atom Aaron: The bomb is hidden somewhere in a school, but there's much more to finding it than that.

Comment Atom Aaron

This Game Is Ok But.. I Couldnt Get Past The Bomb Bit where u had 2 get the bomb where the hell is it??

Review Adam Ironside

I enjoyed this game but there were several errors/bugs that made me unhappy.

For some reason i was not able to go past the part on i think the fourth mission where you dump the bodies in the lak. I dumped them in the lake but the the screen went white and would not let me do anything.
Whilst long descriptions are often good i feel you have over used them, this is probably just me but it is quite annoying at times.
Instead of going SOUTH to pancake house or summit, you should ahve mad it a GO TO Place. I prefer this, but again, maybe it is just me.

Other than that i think it is a good game. Keep up the work Mocha MAn.

p.s, any chance of an add-on or a sequel

Comment Mocha Man and Eager Elmer

Well, it seems that Jim Jones and I are the only people actually doing something on this web site. Where did B.J. Best and everyone else go? C'mon, I want another person to review this game.

Comment Jim Jones

The map isn't percise enough for my taists.... but thats just a small problem... I found my way around and beat it though...

Comment Mocha Man and Eager Elmer

What stuff was sorta bad? I want to know so that I can avoid it in future games. Pleeez submit a comment and tell me!

Review Anonymous

Great game! it has alot f what i look for in a game.... fighting, long descriptions, good discriptions, lots of objects, lots of rooms..... ect. ect. I like it.... some stuff that was sorta bad... but otherwise great!....

Jim Jones